03-10-2014, 05:59 AM
Thanks !
I change the composition again. The feeling I wanted to give didn't work as the camera wasn't enough under the boat.
I think that the painting has potential. I like the angle of the shot and the lighting.
But there is something that doesn't work. Maybe in the environment of the boat, I don't know.
It doesn't feel like a powerful finished painting.
Here is what I've got in the end :
![[Image: OhTZt.jpg]](http://www.hapshack.com/images/OhTZt.jpg)
With the cabin of the boat (yeah, I knew I had forgotten something -.-)
It's not really well integrated I know, I will redesign it if it's worth it.
![[Image: cK0A3.jpg]](http://www.hapshack.com/images/cK0A3.jpg)
Hep would be much appreciated. I've finished it 3/4 days ago, I've already moved on, but well, if I could get this painting on one level higher, I think all this time spent would be a good investment
I change the composition again. The feeling I wanted to give didn't work as the camera wasn't enough under the boat.
I think that the painting has potential. I like the angle of the shot and the lighting.
But there is something that doesn't work. Maybe in the environment of the boat, I don't know.
It doesn't feel like a powerful finished painting.
Here is what I've got in the end :
With the cabin of the boat (yeah, I knew I had forgotten something -.-)
It's not really well integrated I know, I will redesign it if it's worth it.
Hep would be much appreciated. I've finished it 3/4 days ago, I've already moved on, but well, if I could get this painting on one level higher, I think all this time spent would be a good investment