Zaphk's Gorilla Guardian

[Jessica Salehi]

The character is really well painted, and I love the whole design with the character downward. But the top part, or more so top left, with the "with lights and sound" text looks looks underwhelming and has a lot of negative space around it. I feel like that text should look really excited about the fact that it has light and sound, maybe make it bigger? caps? in a balloon? another shape? Looking at how professional packages dealt with the action descriptions can give some ideas.

Anything to do with text and design has been a struggle for me so I'm trying to get better by criting other peoples' design in hopes I remember what I've been taught in classes. XD