04-17-2014, 12:28 PM
Hey looks better already! May I suggest making a JPEG copy, and then in that small copy, just make a quick edit to make his eye look forward at out-of-frame enemy? If you have just leapt into a serious fight with someone that's real trouble, you'd want to at least keep 1 eye trained on him/her all the time, won't you? But it's ultimately about what look you think works, and not about logic (although some logic is still needed in creating and grounding art, art can't be shacked and burdened by logic).
Also there's a BIG light part at the bottom half, and that would suggest more back light on him, or at least rim light on the back-facing edges. Right now I see a big light source from his back, but his person seem front-and-top-lit (especially the shirt) with no indication of there being out-of-frame light source from the front.
Also there's a BIG light part at the bottom half, and that would suggest more back light on him, or at least rim light on the back-facing edges. Right now I see a big light source from his back, but his person seem front-and-top-lit (especially the shirt) with no indication of there being out-of-frame light source from the front.