Advice on this piece?

[Amit Dutta]

I agree with Defre on his emphasis on values. I agree with Meat for hitting the second major issue in the piece which is focus and composition. Both need a lot of work. I did a paintover only focusing on value and comp. I apologize for the shitiness of it, I am using a mouse on a 10 year old laptop. I would have hit a bit more detail highlighting on the main figure to make him more the main focus but it's hard to get detail in nicely and quickly with a mouse lol, so I didn't bother, just cast the lamp light on him and you'll be good.

Hope it helps