06-19-2014, 11:26 AM
I moved your light-in-yonder-wood-clearing over from center to the left, so there's a light source on the left balancing a light source on the right. You might want to move that around more, maybe closer to the cross-point of Rule of Third... . I also rotated the staff forward to give him more of a leading motion instead of looking like he might be being followed by unwanted ghosts (the nervous hand-to-chest pose gave that feeling). Then I added more ghosts to make it look even more like it's a line of figures being lead at the front with that lantern-man. See if these changes help your story or not:
