07-02-2014, 06:43 PM
Your anatomy studies are looking good as always, great work. I'd agree on the edges and stroke economy, especially edges. Since I started paying more attention to edges, my work has changed for the better (at least I feel so). If you'd like to read something, here's a post where Lyraina shared some links about the topic with me:
I hope this works and brings you to the post...
As for the demon lord, I really like the design of his head and face! Something that irritates me a little though is the right side of his coat/cape. Right now to me it looks like theres something pulling at it from the right lower corner. As I see it, if you consider gravity, I think the lines of the cape should be a bit more vertical. (it also disappears right after the staff...) Also, the area of the sleeve/cape of the arm that is holding the staff is still a bit unclear. I think though you haven't fully worked on this area yet since you say that it's still a WIP. It's great though seeing how you apply everything you studied in a work from imagination.
I hope this works and brings you to the post...
As for the demon lord, I really like the design of his head and face! Something that irritates me a little though is the right side of his coat/cape. Right now to me it looks like theres something pulling at it from the right lower corner. As I see it, if you consider gravity, I think the lines of the cape should be a bit more vertical. (it also disappears right after the staff...) Also, the area of the sleeve/cape of the arm that is holding the staff is still a bit unclear. I think though you haven't fully worked on this area yet since you say that it's still a WIP. It's great though seeing how you apply everything you studied in a work from imagination.