Scary Forest WIP

[dwilliams]

Here's a piece I'm close to finishing, and I was curious to know what comments everyone here had on it. It's fairly close to being done, thought overall I need to tighten up the details and rendering in certain places (parts of the girl's clothing, the lectern, etc.) I think the narrative in this piece is pretty obvious- she goes to the book sitting on the lectern, and it magically opens and starts floating, along with her.




Any suggestions? Is something not working, or is there something else I can make better?