Danger Zone

[Suira]

Oh don't worry about the crits, it was obvious you weren't gonna go and revert it back to the begining to fix such minor issues, but I always find that every crit is great to remember things we're not aware about in the next piece :D

I so wanna see the new stylised gestures man! I bet they're gonna be too awesome to be true.

The mage setup looks awesome too , the only thing I can think of is the correlation with the background. It's a very outright profile and it might be hard to integrate with such a high horizon line, maybe making a more graphical background would help or have her inside a dark cave or whatever to pop the light of the spell, I don't know haha.

The other crit I find can help is about the goblin on the right, the gesture is too stiff and the inclination of the shoulders doesn't give a hint of the weight he's carrying on the back.

I made a really sloppy drawing to illustrate my point, of course it's just to express the foreshortening I feel it needs, the proportions you have and everything else looks GREAT. That one's gonna make for a really nice painting man :D

Hope it helps man, and thanks for the cool gifs! I didn't know they existed, so awesome.