11-15-2014, 01:20 AM
Hello there and welcome to Crimson Daggers. I must say that I'm digging that pen illustration involving the floating head and the eye monster. It gives me a very yokaish feeling and reminds me of the work of Tatsuya Morino. One thing that has occurred to me looking at your work is that you need to work on your line weights a bit in those second and third pieces. I think your transitions in weight could use a bit more consistency and smoothness in transition. I can see some breaks and such in the lines. Still, very nice stuff so far, please do post more when you can!