06-29-2015, 07:09 PM
@fauxfresh
Thank you! :)
Yes, as cesartalves and others elsewhere have pointed out, the proportions are off (I tend to make the legs a tad too long), but I wasn't even aware of that until it was pointed out to me... what I meant when I said that I don't know what I'm doing with these are indeed the contour lines... I knew that they flatten the form, but I didn't know how else to construct a figure, so I tried to combat the flatness with shading (needless to say, it didn't really work).
@cesartalves
Thank you for the feedback, I know that I focus too much on the contours, but I find it very hard to get away from that (years of doing it wrong I guess). Any tips on how to combat that?
@smrr
Thank you! :)
Well... I _try_ to think of the structure, but I have a hard time with that, so I always end up putting emphasis on the outline anyway. Thanks for the tips, I'll give them a try!
After the last figure drawing attempts I showed, I tried to learn it from the bottom up by following an online course. I'm still not sure whether it's helpful or not, but here's the simplified skeletons I started with:
![[Image: xsTdsTP.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/xsTdsTP.jpg)
![[Image: TCTm19M.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/TCTm19M.jpg)
![[Image: TgVG2Ni.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/TgVG2Ni.jpg)
![[Image: cyykZc5.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/cyykZc5.jpg)
Thank you! :)
Yes, as cesartalves and others elsewhere have pointed out, the proportions are off (I tend to make the legs a tad too long), but I wasn't even aware of that until it was pointed out to me... what I meant when I said that I don't know what I'm doing with these are indeed the contour lines... I knew that they flatten the form, but I didn't know how else to construct a figure, so I tried to combat the flatness with shading (needless to say, it didn't really work).
@cesartalves
Thank you for the feedback, I know that I focus too much on the contours, but I find it very hard to get away from that (years of doing it wrong I guess). Any tips on how to combat that?
@smrr
Thank you! :)
Well... I _try_ to think of the structure, but I have a hard time with that, so I always end up putting emphasis on the outline anyway. Thanks for the tips, I'll give them a try!
After the last figure drawing attempts I showed, I tried to learn it from the bottom up by following an online course. I'm still not sure whether it's helpful or not, but here's the simplified skeletons I started with:
![[Image: xsTdsTP.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/xsTdsTP.jpg)
![[Image: TCTm19M.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/TCTm19M.jpg)
![[Image: TgVG2Ni.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/TgVG2Ni.jpg)
![[Image: cyykZc5.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/cyykZc5.jpg)
![[Image: SVllTVu.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/SVllTVu.jpg)