08-02-2015, 09:58 PM
Heya,
I like your version with the oversized teeth, you can try adding more bone structure to the character,

Here are also two possible value setups, you can consider. I find in the original, its hard to make the rim strong against a background that's too bright.


Hope it helps! Keep on truckin'
I like your version with the oversized teeth, you can try adding more bone structure to the character,

Here are also two possible value setups, you can consider. I find in the original, its hard to make the rim strong against a background that's too bright.


Hope it helps! Keep on truckin'