09-25-2015, 08:00 AM
whoa! you've been busy! the work you've done for amit's class is look really good, the studies especially.
this isn't really a crit, just something I had fun with;
for the black and white notan sketches, I noticed you could cut back in more with the eraser, at the moment it looks like you're working white onto black, or black onto white, and stopping there, wheras you could do that still, but then cut back and forth, work the eraser in, cut black back over, cut back in the the eraser again, switch back and forth as you go - just sometimes gives you more interesting shapes and it's kinda nice to work that way too.
great stuff though, your studies from the originals look spot on!
this isn't really a crit, just something I had fun with;
for the black and white notan sketches, I noticed you could cut back in more with the eraser, at the moment it looks like you're working white onto black, or black onto white, and stopping there, wheras you could do that still, but then cut back and forth, work the eraser in, cut black back over, cut back in the the eraser again, switch back and forth as you go - just sometimes gives you more interesting shapes and it's kinda nice to work that way too.
great stuff though, your studies from the originals look spot on!