12-04-2015, 11:56 PM
Nice to see you creating a sketchbook, I look forward to seeing more of your work (unfortunately I'm not on Facebook, so I can't see the sketches there). I love the colours and the bold graphic design of the image above though! The only thing I notice is that you seem to have painted (or scanned?) it at a low resolution first, I can see some pixels/artifacts and some of the lines are blurry, which clashes with the graphic stylisation of the image unfortunately. I think the style would benefit from having very crisp edges, possibly even doing the first line drawing in a vector program.
Also, I hope you don't mind me doing a quick overpaint, I couldn't help thinking that this lovely lady would look gorgeous with some dramatic eye makeup:
Also, I hope you don't mind me doing a quick overpaint, I couldn't help thinking that this lovely lady would look gorgeous with some dramatic eye makeup:
![[Image: starlady_overpaint_by_olooriel-d9iz924.jpg]](http://pre11.deviantart.net/7426/th/pre/i/2015/338/b/0/starlady_overpaint_by_olooriel-d9iz924.jpg)