foreshortening crit
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There were a few things I was trying to accomplish with this piece.
First, foreshortening; I'm not 100% sure I accomplished that, It still looks like the hand and the guy are at the same distance. I don't know if its the color or detail.
Second, narrative. I was trying for creepy... like he's trying to grab you, but it just looks like a guy reaching out to me.
Third, composition. I do think an environment would help the composition as well as the narrative, but I have yet to think of a scene to place him in.

Help please.

[Image: robo_reach3.jpg]
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foreshortening crit - by zae1X - 07-16-2012, 03:48 PM
RE: foreshortening crit - by Saraiza - 07-16-2012, 05:50 PM
RE: foreshortening crit - by zae1X - 07-17-2012, 01:15 AM
RE: foreshortening crit - by Flo - 07-16-2012, 06:12 PM
RE: foreshortening crit - by Myriam - 07-17-2012, 04:56 AM
RE: foreshortening crit - by zae1X - 07-17-2012, 05:13 AM

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