03-26-2016, 10:47 AM
I like how you are constructing the basic boxy forms of all your objects in perspective first, always keep that up! Also, AC is a fitting theme for a crossover, her character instantly blends into that world. If you still have time, try out maybe putting some helmed soldiers or someone similar standing guard or talking etc below the wall so that she's not just jumping over the wall but also attacking someone from behind! Might improve the story a little bit. you could extend the canvas a little bit to the bottom to make room for that. Maybe they got spears or banners that you can use to create some more diagonals that emphasize her movement from upper right to lower left? be careful not to cut the comp in half if you do that, though! Anyway, looking forward to the final!