07-19-2012, 07:57 PM
Hey Tk,
Your composition is ok but I think in general you should work with the shapes you have to create more depth. I did a really quick rough paintover to try and show what I mean.
Think about layering the creatures more by separating your forms to create depth, pick a focal point and be consistent in how the light sources light the characters. You have quite a lot of overlapping lines, so I created a bit of space between the main objects to separate them a bit more and show depth. Hope that helps
![[Image: CrimsonDaggers_fb.jpg]](https://lh5.googleusercontent.com/-9geGFsrAVuM/UAfZKK35vVI/AAAAAAAAAEI/-B_qHGmKVt8/s1023/CrimsonDaggers_fb.jpg)
Your composition is ok but I think in general you should work with the shapes you have to create more depth. I did a really quick rough paintover to try and show what I mean.
Think about layering the creatures more by separating your forms to create depth, pick a focal point and be consistent in how the light sources light the characters. You have quite a lot of overlapping lines, so I created a bit of space between the main objects to separate them a bit more and show depth. Hope that helps