09-03-2012, 05:23 PM
Missed the deadline but glad I worked on this. Still looks unfinished so I'll call it a WIP for now.
Crit and suggestions welcome.
@iCi: Really like your colors. I prefer the composition of your original plant planet sketch, because in your Sept 02 update, the creature on the left and the plant structure(?) on the right are competing and its harder to see where the focal point should be. I would suggest increasing or decreasing the size of either.
@Flo: Nice textures you have going. The green mass on the upper left corner and the water seem like they need some more definition.
@JonHop: I like the shadows you have so far. You may want to consider upping the contrast on them. Also, the island in the middle should be casting a shadow.
Crit and suggestions welcome.
@iCi: Really like your colors. I prefer the composition of your original plant planet sketch, because in your Sept 02 update, the creature on the left and the plant structure(?) on the right are competing and its harder to see where the focal point should be. I would suggest increasing or decreasing the size of either.
@Flo: Nice textures you have going. The green mass on the upper left corner and the water seem like they need some more definition.
@JonHop: I like the shadows you have so far. You may want to consider upping the contrast on them. Also, the island in the middle should be casting a shadow.