11-08-2012, 07:07 AM
Hey eZTarg8.
I really like the overall concept you did there but for me there are few things I would like for you to add/change. First one is lack of epicness. I can see that you are going for that because of the theme (Warhammer) and there is big battle going on. Add more mob members and few more dead (because that dreadnought is spitting a lot of bullets and there is just one dead mutant). Rickohets of bullets on the stairs, beneath the mob, on the floor. Also, this explosion on the cathedral is to weak. Make it bigger, more smoke and debris. Second, add more depth to the picture with use of atmosphere and shadows on characters. And lastly what is the focus/center of the picture? For me I would say the mob but at this point I'm not sure. Or is it the dreadnought, cathedral? Also, why are some of the characters turned away from dreadnought? Because I can imagine that he is biggest threat at the captured moment.
So, that's my two cents. Just keep it up and I would love to see further progress of this picture.
Cheers.
I really like the overall concept you did there but for me there are few things I would like for you to add/change. First one is lack of epicness. I can see that you are going for that because of the theme (Warhammer) and there is big battle going on. Add more mob members and few more dead (because that dreadnought is spitting a lot of bullets and there is just one dead mutant). Rickohets of bullets on the stairs, beneath the mob, on the floor. Also, this explosion on the cathedral is to weak. Make it bigger, more smoke and debris. Second, add more depth to the picture with use of atmosphere and shadows on characters. And lastly what is the focus/center of the picture? For me I would say the mob but at this point I'm not sure. Or is it the dreadnought, cathedral? Also, why are some of the characters turned away from dreadnought? Because I can imagine that he is biggest threat at the captured moment.
So, that's my two cents. Just keep it up and I would love to see further progress of this picture.
Cheers.