Trying to work a couple things out.

[AdamMiconi]

Hey man, this has really come a long way from the start. Your values are a lot stronger now and you're colors are nice and rich but not obnoxious. I know you've probably called this one finish but to me it's "almost" finished. I love the loose brush strokes but I would tighten it up just a bit on the areas of focus. Her hands and face.

I wouldn't tighten it up to the point it doesn't fit in but I think a little edge control will give you more interest and pull you in a bit more. My 2¢.