First presentation
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You have a pretty cool eye for texture, and you seem much more comfortable working in higher contrast kind of rendering like metallic surfaces or something getting hit by a direct light. The only thing i'd reccomend is to just keep studying anatomy, especially faces at different angles.

Your Sith piece looks almost professional quality, the only thing really taking away from it are the far less rendered/distracting figures in the background. I think you could maybe just black them out and bring more attention to that awesomely rendered face and hand. (also try to get his loincloth a bit more accurate Thumbs_up that would help a bit)

Your last piece is pretty damn cool too!

only thing that bothers me is that you seem to rely on artificial lighting sources a lot, like red, you know, blue light etc. That definitely works for these monster type characters, but do try and get some life studies in and try to get more natural colors in the pieces

So yea, faces, anatomy, life studies. Looking forward to more buddy!!

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First presentation - by Tatar88 - 02-08-2013, 06:39 AM
RE: First presentation - by Tatar88 - 09-05-2013, 01:36 AM
RE: First presentation - by Tatar88 - 10-27-2013, 04:24 AM
RE: First presentation - by Rognoll - 11-01-2013, 01:56 AM
RE: First presentation - by Tatar88 - 11-05-2013, 05:30 AM
RE: First presentation - by Tatar88 - 12-10-2013, 06:39 AM
RE: First presentation - by Tygerson - 12-17-2013, 05:55 AM
RE: First presentation - by Tatar88 - 01-16-2014, 08:59 AM
RE: First presentation - by Tatar88 - 01-27-2014, 12:31 PM
RE: First presentation - by Tatar88 - 07-22-2014, 07:54 AM
RE: First presentation - by Fedodika - 07-22-2014, 09:19 AM

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