Critique requested, thanks!
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You have picked a very tough lighting situation. The alien is pretty good, but the guy, not as much, I feel like you have ref for one, but not the other. I also feel like the gun should cast a shadow on the guy, his nose should definitely cast a shadow on his cheek and eye. Also, the alien has a kind of cold rim light on his head but not on it's arms, and the guy has no rim light at all. I'm not sure what the orangey brown stuff at the bottom left is. If it's fire, he would die even without an alien there. If it's smoke, should that gun really produce smoke like that?!?!? Is it just that you didn't want to draw the alien body?

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Critique requested, thanks! - by jerryjr261 - 05-21-2013, 03:02 PM
RE: Critique requested, thanks! - by ChantalFournier - 05-22-2013, 05:57 AM
RE: Critique requested, thanks! - by jerryjr261 - 05-22-2013, 09:12 AM
RE: Critique requested, thanks! - by delCid - 05-22-2013, 07:18 PM
RE: Critique requested, thanks! - by Amit Dutta - 05-23-2013, 12:01 AM

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