08-12-2013, 09:39 AM
Hi Trevor,
I hope this is okay...not very comfortable doing this kind of stuff, but I saw your Orc painting in the finished work section, but thought this would be a more appropriate place to put the crits.
I really like the idea, and you've got all the elements there, but they are a bit static...almost like a dress rehersal where everyone knows their role but is just going through the motions.
The battle is taking place in the forest, but there isn't really an indication of this where the characters are at. I roughed out a very quick sketch in an effort to describe what I am trying to say.
![[Image: 20130811-trevor-s-composition-sketch.jpg]](http://www2.whidbey.com/brianj/images/201308/20130811-trevor-s-composition-sketch.jpg)
Hope this is at least somewhat helpful. Keep at it! Looking forward to seeing more.
I hope this is okay...not very comfortable doing this kind of stuff, but I saw your Orc painting in the finished work section, but thought this would be a more appropriate place to put the crits.
I really like the idea, and you've got all the elements there, but they are a bit static...almost like a dress rehersal where everyone knows their role but is just going through the motions.
The battle is taking place in the forest, but there isn't really an indication of this where the characters are at. I roughed out a very quick sketch in an effort to describe what I am trying to say.
Hope this is at least somewhat helpful. Keep at it! Looking forward to seeing more.