07-06-2013, 08:19 AM
Hey, it's not that bad. Mentioning feet five times though.. I don't know ;) I've seen much worse feet in my days. The forms are pretty good. Things you can do to quickly touch it up is bring the arm to our right into shadow, because the way the light falls it should be. Also push the values a bit down on the legs and feet.
The figure kind of floats in the image. There's this white rimlight from the right that doesn't really help. Either paint it in more subtely and have it fall over her form better, and have it cast light in the throne, the cobblestones and the green ivy as well - or don't have it at all.
The hand to our left also needs a castshadow. Other than that, ain't so bad!
Don't be harsh on yourself. We always do our best. Keep your head up, bring what you've learned with you to the next piece and keep exploring and enjoying! :)
The figure kind of floats in the image. There's this white rimlight from the right that doesn't really help. Either paint it in more subtely and have it fall over her form better, and have it cast light in the throne, the cobblestones and the green ivy as well - or don't have it at all.
The hand to our left also needs a castshadow. Other than that, ain't so bad!
Don't be harsh on yourself. We always do our best. Keep your head up, bring what you've learned with you to the next piece and keep exploring and enjoying! :)