Oh my crit!
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(07-12-2013, 07:06 AM)ChantalFournier Wrote: The top of the curvy bridge thing should probably become paler in the distance and the bg as well. Right now, it looks like it's coming back towards us and we start seeing the underside and that's confusing. You should push back the building at the extreme right too, by making it paler. Now it feels like it's right against the curvy bridge. It's an interesting concept but I don't know if we should see ground or water or cloud under the structures, it's pretty floaty.

Ahh! It is supposed to look like it's coming back towards you! But the distance of it seems weird, like it comes back too fast? Or we see too much of the underside? I have -no- idea how to paint it to look right :O
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Oh my crit! - by aviaht - 07-12-2013, 07:00 AM
RE: Oh my crit! - by ChantalFournier - 07-12-2013, 07:06 AM
RE: Oh my crit! - by aviaht - 07-12-2013, 07:14 AM
RE: Oh my crit! - by MissLillyArt - 07-12-2013, 11:05 AM
RE: Oh my crit! - by Patrick Gaumond - 07-12-2013, 12:24 PM

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