07-12-2013, 11:05 AM
Your values and composition are great, but I think the perspective is whats throwing you off. I did a paintover for you.
I feel like the stairs at the front aren't steep enough to be stairs and they look rather flat, also the walkway up to the castle, if it's stairs it is too flat, there needs to be a bit of an incline. The only issue with the stairway coming back towards us was that it wasn't big enough. I hope that helps (:
I feel like the stairs at the front aren't steep enough to be stairs and they look rather flat, also the walkway up to the castle, if it's stairs it is too flat, there needs to be a bit of an incline. The only issue with the stairway coming back towards us was that it wasn't big enough. I hope that helps (: