07-12-2013, 12:24 PM
Hey this looks pretty good compositionally :)
In addition to the two previous comments, I think you could also make the foreground darker, and perhaps add a person in the foreground for scale purposes. Right now there's nothing really giving insight to the size of the structure, and to me it looks it pretty small since its only 4 or 5 times as tall as the the stairs you have here.
making the foreground slightly darker is also gonna make it punch out a bit more and frame the comp pretty well. Everything else looks pretty rad though, I like the concept and you did a nice job with the atmospheric perspective around the castle thing
In addition to the two previous comments, I think you could also make the foreground darker, and perhaps add a person in the foreground for scale purposes. Right now there's nothing really giving insight to the size of the structure, and to me it looks it pretty small since its only 4 or 5 times as tall as the the stairs you have here.
making the foreground slightly darker is also gonna make it punch out a bit more and frame the comp pretty well. Everything else looks pretty rad though, I like the concept and you did a nice job with the atmospheric perspective around the castle thing