07-16-2013, 02:04 AM
She doesn't look like shes running away. How she holds her weight is all to stiff. she looks like she is just standing. No urgency/movement to it but she has gun? Have her leaning forward give a bit of twist to her and the dress keep that weight going forward. Inertia isn't gonna let her look back to easy while running. Basically i think the action could be more dynamic. remember Her and the dress are separate. get ref for the hands they don't look like they are gripping properly. I like how you have done the gun but i think the hands kinda throw its design of a bit.