Crab Character Critique

[Zachary McLean]

Thank you so much! Took out the claw, added a bit of rim light, and infused the helmet to his head. Let me know if it doesn't look good. I don't know if I added enough rim light, but I didn't want it to steal the show. Does it look Legends of the Cryptids quality? -Haha. By taking out the claw, the composition allows your eye to go to the focus/his head more.-nice.

I am really glad you pointed out that you weren't sure whether he was wearing a helmet or he was infused with the shell. It's changes like that really help make the design more believable.



Keep the critiques coming.