character - critique welcome
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How accurate to you want his design to be to his back story? As already mentioned above, his design doesn't make any connection to having any relationship with the church. Also his costume look more modern than 14th century. Those spikes on arm guard look especially modern. Also having taken a quick look around the Internet, it seems during the 14th century they have much higher boots (going above the knee), as well as tighter pants pants. Another thing to consider is looking for some visual characteristics that defines weapons of 14th century, which will help him look more unique from other fantasy genre assassins. Try to always have a specific reason behind the look of everything on him.


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character - critique welcome - by Vigil - 01-15-2014, 02:39 AM
RE: character - critique welcome - by Psychotime - 01-15-2014, 02:14 PM
RE: character - critique welcome - by Vigil - 01-16-2014, 12:23 PM
RE: character - critique welcome - by Vigil - 01-19-2014, 08:03 AM
RE: character - critique welcome - by meat - 01-21-2014, 12:41 AM

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