02-03-2014, 09:57 AM
thats awesome!
VERY cool creepy dark vibe.
my first crit would be to make sure to get a good value separation between foreground, midground (where the player is) and background. the pillars in the foreground look too similar in value to the bridge, imo. they kind of merge together.
same problem with the shadow on the bridge and the blackness in the back, its a bit too similar and it looks like the bridge is part of the background in some parts, which takes away some of the impact. i think i get what youre going for but be careful with making it mix in too much (i'm referring especially to the area with the 3rd spike on the border of the bridge from the left of the image)
skull design and the things that look like raining dots are very cool.
keep it up :)
VERY cool creepy dark vibe.
my first crit would be to make sure to get a good value separation between foreground, midground (where the player is) and background. the pillars in the foreground look too similar in value to the bridge, imo. they kind of merge together.
same problem with the shadow on the bridge and the blackness in the back, its a bit too similar and it looks like the bridge is part of the background in some parts, which takes away some of the impact. i think i get what youre going for but be careful with making it mix in too much (i'm referring especially to the area with the 3rd spike on the border of the bridge from the left of the image)
skull design and the things that look like raining dots are very cool.
keep it up :)
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