Help me become a Professional Artist

[Samszym]

Yo, drawings are looking nice! I can't think of many helpful crits, just keep grinding and leveling up the skills!
When you're cross hatching try not to make the lines go near 90 degrees to each other, that flattens out the form a lot. Go across the form or with it. Hope to see some longer figure studies soon, make sure you clearly separate the light side from the shadow side