05-05-2014, 07:30 AM
Hey guys,
I know something is wrong, but can't really put my finger on it. I have tried a more structured approach and put some focus on the compositon. What I wanted is a clear separation of values and giving the viewer's some area of rest in the foggy parts, while directing them to the guy on the right as the focal point.
At least that was the plan, but now I am completely unsure about everything. Could someone tell me if it's going in the right direction and what I could do/correct to improve it?
Thanks!
I know something is wrong, but can't really put my finger on it. I have tried a more structured approach and put some focus on the compositon. What I wanted is a clear separation of values and giving the viewer's some area of rest in the foggy parts, while directing them to the guy on the right as the focal point.
At least that was the plan, but now I am completely unsure about everything. Could someone tell me if it's going in the right direction and what I could do/correct to improve it?
Thanks!