marty's art addiction

[martypawpaw]

The layering in the future Hong Kong works well, so it has more depth than the forest one. A couple of things might be contributing to that closed in feel - for one the placement of the largest tree in the front kind of blocks the viewer's eye from travelling deeper into the scene. There is also not really a very close foreground

thank you so much for the crit it helped me understand what was wrong with that!