vymnis sketchbook

[vymnis]

Hi Vymnis, I really like your sketchbook, your figure practice pages are really nice! The girl riding the (bomb?) is cool too. The lady with the axe looks great too, just, she looks a little 'flat' to me, what do you think? Like she's a cardboard cutout. It could be how she's standing, since both her feet are in line with each other but her torso is in 3/4 view - or maybe try to play with the values a bit.

Just my observation anyway! Keep up your hard work and great drawing!

yeah she stands out too much from the background because of the hard gradient, the fact that shes not blended into the background of the picture kind of makes it look like shes floating or like shes a cardboard cutout against a wall.