08-22-2012, 12:31 PM
Good work Saraiza. Really happy you decided to try out the random character generator. Came out great.
That last one is comin along pretty cool so far. I think it's missin some dust flyin up off the ground from the birds wings flappin. Maybe a sunset to indicate that one of them is about to die if not both. I think some harder edges on the mountains as well, as they seem a little too blurry at the moment; I think you were trying to get them out of focus? Maybe some motion blurring on the spear to show some implied movement. Also, maybe some more feathers flying off, so it seems like a real struggle. just some ideas, I'm sure you'll figure something out, there's a lot more you can do with it.
Keep up the good work.
That last one is comin along pretty cool so far. I think it's missin some dust flyin up off the ground from the birds wings flappin. Maybe a sunset to indicate that one of them is about to die if not both. I think some harder edges on the mountains as well, as they seem a little too blurry at the moment; I think you were trying to get them out of focus? Maybe some motion blurring on the spear to show some implied movement. Also, maybe some more feathers flying off, so it seems like a real struggle. just some ideas, I'm sure you'll figure something out, there's a lot more you can do with it.
Keep up the good work.