12-08-2014, 03:02 PM
Hi Lilly! I think your eye studies are really getting there. The forms are really coming through and I think you shouldn't be afraid to go into more detail.
Your studies are really cool too and you're right that you could stand to make your darks darker but I think it goes both ways and some of your light areas could be pushed a little brighter too. I think your images can look a little flat because they lack contrast. In your first study, the shadow behind the man the shadow cast over half of him, are farther in contrast to the light on his face and collar than what you used.
The glow in the scifi thing could also stand to be a bit brighter as well as the sparks on the plane. Other than that, I think you need to keep an eye on your angles when copying shapes. The rest is great so far!
Your studies are really cool too and you're right that you could stand to make your darks darker but I think it goes both ways and some of your light areas could be pushed a little brighter too. I think your images can look a little flat because they lack contrast. In your first study, the shadow behind the man the shadow cast over half of him, are farther in contrast to the light on his face and collar than what you used.
The glow in the scifi thing could also stand to be a bit brighter as well as the sparks on the plane. Other than that, I think you need to keep an eye on your angles when copying shapes. The rest is great so far!