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This is looking good in general but its best to post a completed image for a Crit, that way we don't have to make asuptions :) I'm gonna crit this as a concept.
The head was too small. It almost feels like you painted the character seperately and then decided to make a full body shot.

The Design doesn't say anything. This caracter could be fantasy or sci-fi. you need to have a clear theme or design before you start.

The image currently has no focus. because of how bright the sword is i'm gonna asume that that's the focus. (you could use the glow of the sword as a secondary light source)

You need to work on your textures. there is no distintion between the leather and cloth. Some studies should fix that.

[Image: Untitled-1-2.jpg]
ps: it looks like the character is wearing chainmail or a metal sponge inside his coat and it feels out of place...the image is too low res to tell but if thats a photo, you should try to paint it yourself because that amount to detail stands out because the rest of the image isn't detailed enough to match it.
I hope this somehow helps :)

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Help - by Novaking - 08-26-2014, 11:33 AM
RE: Help - by Jingai-Jigokumoto - 08-26-2014, 12:23 PM
RE: Help - by Novaking - 08-26-2014, 12:52 PM
RE: Help - by meat - 08-26-2014, 11:37 PM
RE: Help - by Theory2D - 08-27-2014, 01:59 AM
RE: Help - by Novaking - 08-27-2014, 03:55 AM
RE: Help - by meat - 08-27-2014, 04:27 AM
RE: Help - by Jingai-Jigokumoto - 08-27-2014, 08:37 AM
RE: Help - by BenFlores - 08-27-2014, 12:37 PM
RE: Help - by vansty - 08-28-2014, 04:58 PM

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