11-10-2014, 05:25 AM
Nice job in general dude. Great character in this little guy. Couple of things niggled at me (using your latest update)
1. The lighting still seems a little inconsistent. That heavy underlit nose shadow seems to be out of place or maybe is over emphasised given that there is a distinct top light source as well (forehead, hands). Something just doesn't quite seem right.
2. Unless you told me it was a vampire I wouldn't have figured it. If this is a concept, then it might need to be made more obvious. If it is a painting of a character from your stories, then it doesn't matter so much.
3. General finish. This might be stylistic preference and not a huge deal, but you may want to consider tightening up the linework around areas like his collar and shirt ruffles. It just seems like it would benefit your comic style to be cleaner. Either that or make the sketchiness a part of the overall style rather than in small areas. This totally depends on what you are going for stylistically.
1. The lighting still seems a little inconsistent. That heavy underlit nose shadow seems to be out of place or maybe is over emphasised given that there is a distinct top light source as well (forehead, hands). Something just doesn't quite seem right.
2. Unless you told me it was a vampire I wouldn't have figured it. If this is a concept, then it might need to be made more obvious. If it is a painting of a character from your stories, then it doesn't matter so much.
3. General finish. This might be stylistic preference and not a huge deal, but you may want to consider tightening up the linework around areas like his collar and shirt ruffles. It just seems like it would benefit your comic style to be cleaner. Either that or make the sketchiness a part of the overall style rather than in small areas. This totally depends on what you are going for stylistically.