girl with weird hair

[maggie]

Thank you all for the helpful advices and videos.
I made more changes today. I've never painted so many variations of something. It kinda drained me haha.

Here's what I came up with. Her collar looks weird now that I look at it..
I think the hair now looks fine, although I spent so much time looking at this painting that it no longer excites me. If you have any critiques, please share with me!