12-17-2014, 11:57 PM
Great work in here!
I think it might be interesting to have the guy's head either turned to face us or looking towards the light. It might make for a more interesting action line, since at the moment the majority of his pose is very dynamic but when you get to his face its perfectly parallel to his shoulders, which also form a very square and somewhat stiff line. The right hand holding the little stick is a bit confusing to me as well
And I also agree with book, another character would be neat. Maybe a dead guy on the floor that he slew, which would be a great opportunity for a golden spiral, or someone approaching him or something. Right now it looks like hes just striking a pose for a photoshoot .
But great work on everything else. It looks very professional!
I think it might be interesting to have the guy's head either turned to face us or looking towards the light. It might make for a more interesting action line, since at the moment the majority of his pose is very dynamic but when you get to his face its perfectly parallel to his shoulders, which also form a very square and somewhat stiff line. The right hand holding the little stick is a bit confusing to me as well
And I also agree with book, another character would be neat. Maybe a dead guy on the floor that he slew, which would be a great opportunity for a golden spiral, or someone approaching him or something. Right now it looks like hes just striking a pose for a photoshoot .
But great work on everything else. It looks very professional!