Mountain fight
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You almost have an "=" sign composition from the man in the air, and the top edge of the rock, and then a straight up line connecting the "=" sign from the warrior, which makes the whole image very static and stable, like a bridge. If you want a more dramatic feel, I suggest looking into changing the composition to have bigger diagonal lines.

To make the dead man even more obvious as a man and not a rock, have you though of adding some human-related details like the fingers somewhere, or horns on his helmet?

As for realistic cloud when you're not used to painting clouds, you're just going to have to use a lot of references.


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Mountain fight - by sasemax - 12-21-2015, 04:47 AM
RE: Mountain fight - by Broadway - 12-21-2015, 08:11 AM
RE: Mountain fight - by meat - 12-21-2015, 03:21 PM
RE: Mountain fight - by sasemax - 12-22-2015, 06:52 PM

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