01-12-2016, 03:23 AM
neopatogen
Great work!
This being a construction drawing, it is exactly what I want to see.
In time try to simplify things more and more, simplify first, then add complexity after.
You will get better at this the more you do these things.
I see you added a little rendering to the drawing as well already, here I have some advice, which is very similar in someways.
Try to simplify more, make all shadows the same value (if they come from the same light, and are projected on the same material)
Make all midtones the same value.. etc.. keep things simple and consistent, after this you can try to add the small gradations and bumps.
I did this in the quick paintover, as you can see it immediately adds more form to the piece.
Great work and can't wait to see the value study, and as always, copy form/light, not value.
Use value as a tool to paint the light interacting with the surface.
![[Image: YrKVPHJ.png]](http://i.imgur.com/YrKVPHJ.png)
Great work!
This being a construction drawing, it is exactly what I want to see.
In time try to simplify things more and more, simplify first, then add complexity after.
You will get better at this the more you do these things.
I see you added a little rendering to the drawing as well already, here I have some advice, which is very similar in someways.
Try to simplify more, make all shadows the same value (if they come from the same light, and are projected on the same material)
Make all midtones the same value.. etc.. keep things simple and consistent, after this you can try to add the small gradations and bumps.
I did this in the quick paintover, as you can see it immediately adds more form to the piece.
Great work and can't wait to see the value study, and as always, copy form/light, not value.
Use value as a tool to paint the light interacting with the surface.