Digital art noob looking for critiques!

[John]

This was the first time I've ever done anything with a background, so critiques on composition would be lovely!

Hi! Welcome to the Crimson Daggers. On to the critique! (Which are really just opinions and I could be very wrong about them.)


I love how you rendered the crystals and the moon. It might help with the composition to change the angles of your background elements. I took the liberty to mark over your work (sorry!), and kinda demonstrated how it would look if the crystals were spread out. It might be a nice idea for them to point or suggest towards the intended focal point, the bikini-elf. I also took the liberty of turning the moon as such, so the tips point toward the subject, plus framing the bikini-elf better..

Love the your use of perspective on the cracks of light on the floor.

I hope it helps even just a pinch and hope you'll have a nice stay in the forums!