CC 1: Asa's Studies [WIP]
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(03-26-2016, 01:59 PM)Amit Dutta Wrote: updaaaaayt! cool to see progress. Right now the perspective of Jon doesn't quite match the scene. If you didn't want to change Jon, maybe bring ghost down a little to match his ground plane, and have that edge a bit flatter to us than it is at the moment.  Also tangent at tip of stone lantern and that edge. Make the lantern overlap a bit more.  Good luck!!

Thanks so much Amit! I always have trouble with perspective, it's one of my issues. I'll see what I can do with John, but I'll definitely move Ghost down now that I'm seeing the perspective problems! Darn tangents, hiding from my sleep-addled eyes!

Really appreciate your crtis Amit, thank you :)

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CC 1: Asa's Studies [WIP] - by Arapersonica - 03-23-2016, 06:19 AM
RE: CC 1: Asa's Studies [WIP] - by John - 03-23-2016, 07:12 AM
RE: CC 1: Asa's Studies [WIP] - by Arapersonica - 03-23-2016, 09:03 AM
RE: CC 1: Asa's Studies [WIP] - by crackedskull - 03-23-2016, 07:23 AM
RE: CC 1: Asa's Studies [WIP] - by Arapersonica - 03-23-2016, 09:04 AM
RE: CC 1: Asa's Studies [WIP] - by Arapersonica - 03-23-2016, 04:59 PM
RE: CC 1: Asa's Studies [WIP] - by Amit Dutta - 03-23-2016, 11:13 AM
RE: CC 1: Asa's Studies [WIP] - by Arapersonica - 03-23-2016, 05:02 PM
RE: CC 1: Asa's Studies [WIP] - by Arapersonica - 03-25-2016, 05:13 PM
RE: CC 1: Asa's Studies [WIP] - by Legion Brewer - 03-25-2016, 06:03 PM
RE: CC 1: Asa's Studies [WIP] - by Arapersonica - 03-26-2016, 03:53 AM
RE: CC 1: Asa's Studies [WIP] - by Amit Dutta - 03-26-2016, 01:59 PM
RE: CC 1: Asa's Studies [WIP] - by Arapersonica - 03-26-2016, 05:24 PM
RE: CC 1: Asa's Studies [WIP] - by crackedskull - 03-26-2016, 05:32 PM
RE: CC 1: Asa's Studies [WIP] - by Arapersonica - 03-26-2016, 07:49 PM

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