04-21-2016, 09:25 AM
Pay a bit of attention to scale and foreshortening in perspective. The gravestones are larger than the doorway to the church. The vertical height of the walls of the building are very small compared to the roof height. Seems more like an A frame building proportion than a gothic structure.
The figure is absolutely gigantic, which is fine if that is what you are going for, but I wasn't sure it was. Keep it up, the mood is getting there...I would start to bring in accent highlights a bit more saturated to give it some pop. In terms of narrative, the hands in the tree are a bit too ambiguous but you can keep them if you like. I would be tempted to put unsuspecting villagers/figure walking along path in front of the building, or coming out of the building..so it is as if they are about to be pounced on if you wanted to add drama and narrative
The figure is absolutely gigantic, which is fine if that is what you are going for, but I wasn't sure it was. Keep it up, the mood is getting there...I would start to bring in accent highlights a bit more saturated to give it some pop. In terms of narrative, the hands in the tree are a bit too ambiguous but you can keep them if you like. I would be tempted to put unsuspecting villagers/figure walking along path in front of the building, or coming out of the building..so it is as if they are about to be pounced on if you wanted to add drama and narrative