04-14-2016, 01:30 AM
I don't see huge issues with the perspective except for what P-dawg said but.... hand hands hands hands......do a bit more work on them because they are so important for this piece.
Also do more work on material differentiation. I know it can be a style thing, but i feel it isn't seeing your previous work. I feel you need to add more design and narrative...the scroll is blank, the books are blank, her design is mostly blank. Sometimes the additional elements help make this a world we want to believe in...so make that happen. You aren't weaving a picture, you're weaving a world.
Sorry for the abruptness, in a belligerent mood tonight.
Also do more work on material differentiation. I know it can be a style thing, but i feel it isn't seeing your previous work. I feel you need to add more design and narrative...the scroll is blank, the books are blank, her design is mostly blank. Sometimes the additional elements help make this a world we want to believe in...so make that happen. You aren't weaving a picture, you're weaving a world.
Sorry for the abruptness, in a belligerent mood tonight.