07-04-2016, 10:36 PM
(07-04-2016, 12:31 AM)Zipfelzeus Wrote: Oh wow really nice work with those latest illustrations. It's really nice to see some finished work in a sketchbook! Not that if people don't do it then they're horrible. Lots of people use sketchbook in very different ways.
The WIP one already looks like you pushed it very far. Nice work on the hard angle you chose!
As for the horse comps: I'd say go for a one where the horse is standing. I think it creates more tension. If the horse is lying down it needs a moment to get up but the standing position indicates that it sprint away at any second. The next step would be to figure out what the scene is all about, because it look like a hunting scene: If that's the case I would chose on of the comps on the right but make sure the guy is already about to shoot the animal while it's still oblivious/or has just noticed him.
That would be my suggestions. I hope that helps in anyway haha.
Yeah I think it's nice when you're looking at someone's sketchbook to be able to see how they use their sketches and studies to produce a finished piece. I'm also still open to crits on my finished work, so I post them up just in case people spot things that I can improve. Thanks for the suggestions on the horse illustration. I actually took one of the comps on the right, but I changed it so that the horse is standing instead of lying down.
Some stuff from yesterday and the day before:
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