CC4: Jonny's Comic

[JyonnyNovice]

Thanks dude! I agree about the tones, it was the one area I hadn't really planned out, I just knew I'd probably add tones at the end, . when inking I got carried away with hatching but didn't do enough to make things pop so ended up adding the tones in addition. Another thing learned for next time! Is that last big panel texture distracting? I thought it was dramatic with the white spaces and contrast to the rest of the panels.