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06-14-2016, 11:57 AM

awesome, much better ^^ just wondering if you need to say corpulent wiener in the last panel? feels a bit like it's there to justify the title, but I don't think it needs justifying since the subject is pretty clear. Feels like something typically lewd could work better 'yea you know you love it' or whatever (or something funnier). Just my thoughts again, feel free to ignore anything I add, it's all subjective ^^

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CC4 CTrow WIP - by CTrow - 06-13-2016, 02:36 AM

RE: CC4 CTrow WIP - by JyonnyNovice - 06-13-2016, 05:40 AM

RE: CC4 CTrow WIP - by CTrow - 06-13-2016, 05:47 AM

RE: CC4 CTrow WIP - by JyonnyNovice - 06-13-2016, 06:05 AM

RE: CC4 CTrow WIP - by CTrow - 06-13-2016, 06:24 AM

RE: CC4 CTrow WIP - by TwilightExplode - 06-14-2016, 12:36 AM

RE: CC4 CTrow WIP - by CTrow - 06-14-2016, 03:04 AM

RE: CC4 CTrow WIP - by CTrow - 06-14-2016, 03:42 AM