CC4: The Corpulent Weiner
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(06-14-2016, 01:53 AM)JyonnyNovice Wrote: Looks interesting! I like the pun at the start, and the hotdog character looks cool. Looking forward to seeing it with the dialogue!

Thanks! Does the general narrative read without the dialogue so far? Any problems with the flow of the panels from what you can tell?
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CC4: The Corpulent Weiner - by TwilightExplode - 06-14-2016, 12:18 AM
RE: CC4: The Corpulent Weiner - by JyonnyNovice - 06-14-2016, 01:53 AM
RE: CC4: The Corpulent Weiner - by TwilightExplode - 06-14-2016, 02:11 AM
RE: CC4: The Corpulent Weiner - by CTrow - 06-14-2016, 03:36 AM
RE: CC4: The Corpulent Weiner - by JyonnyNovice - 06-14-2016, 04:30 AM
RE: CC4: The Corpulent Weiner - by Amit Dutta - 06-19-2016, 02:57 PM
RE: CC4: The Corpulent Weiner - by JyonnyNovice - 06-19-2016, 11:24 PM
RE: CC4: The Corpulent Weiner - by JyonnyNovice - 06-22-2016, 02:08 AM

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